Please check to make sure there are no error and program work perfectly

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I made a choose your own adventure story

please check and make sure there are no error

here is the link

once you have checked the program please take this poll

Program complies with out errors max choice 4
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  • there are runtime errors
  • there are syntax errors
  • there are indentation errors
  • theres a different type of error

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User chooses the results of the program. Meaning the program does not decide what happens, the user does.
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use conditional statements to get through a decision tree rate between 1 and 10
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The user has the opportunity to make 7 decisions if they choose the right path.
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commented properly and code is clean
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once done with poll please leave comment below

Thanks for your time i appreciate it

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hey, the code could have been much cleaner, instead of using a million "or"s for different capitalization, just use .lower()

for the sake of consistency I think you should have used either only single quotes (apostrophes ’ ') or only double quotes (" ")

I know you add spaces in between the \n for the sake of readability in the code but it just looks really weird when you run the code

after a choice you could also use a colon (:), newline (\n), or even a space

the grammar is also kinda trash, there are like a million places where you should have used “you’re” instead of “your”

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thanks you for giving me this feedback :smile:

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for the spaces after \n for readability, maybe do

"""line 1
line 2"""

And, you can simplify your ors also by using pyspellchecker · PyPI to account for spelling mistakes and use the in operator, e.g.choice in {"1", "2", "3"}

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thanks you for your comment i appreciate it

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